"I loved writing once
& something made me to love it more
My wishes came true
my life changed a lot.
Present was full of papers& future was waiting for me.
After i realized that something was missing,
I tried to get it back
But it vanished in the air
& it cherished tears in my heart
Wanted that something now
because it was the root of my life."
By
Preseedha Pradeep
VIII A
and u should write something more...
ReplyDeleteYOU WANT ALL HAPPINESS
ReplyDeleteFOR YOUR MOM DAD,
YOU DON'T WANT THEM
TO BE EVER SAD.
YOUR DAD IS YOUR SWEETHEART
AND MOM IS BLOSSOM,
WHEN THEY STANDS TOGETHER
THEY REALLY LOOK AWESOME.
YOUR BODY IS MINE
BUT YOUR PARENTS ARE THE SOUL,
IN YOUR LIFE THEY ARE
PLAYING YOUR GOD'S ROLE.
WHEN THEY SAYS YOU
TO DO SOMETHING,
IF YOU COULDN'T SO
YOU GOOD FOR NOTHING.
YOU LIKE THEIR KISS
ON YOUR FOREHEAD AT NIGHTS,
WITH THEIR BLESSINGS
YOU WANT TO TOUCH THE HIGHTS.
YOU PROMISE THAT IN YOUR LIFE
YOU WONT DO ANYTHING BAD,
CZ YOU CAN'T SEE THEIR EYES DOWN
AND YOU ARE IN LOVE WITH YOUR MOM DAD.
I SEE THE PICTURE POSTED BY PRESEEDHA PRADEEP (VIII A)
FIRSTLY, I TELL YOU ...." YOUR BLOG TITLE IS - WE THE GIRLS, OH NO! THE BIRDS".,
BIRDS ARE FREE IN NATURE, THEY HAVE NO TENSION, FEAR, SAD.....ANY THING. THEY HAVE ONLY PLEASANT FACE AT IN EVERY MOMENT.
IF YOU ARE BIRD......THEN SECONDLY CLEARUP THE TEARS USING TOWEL.OK.....& ENJOY THE FREEDOM FROM YOUR HOUSE, SCHOOL....& IN ANY PLACE.....
BY
RAMBO..
cn u giv me some tips..??
ReplyDeleteto improv my skills??
Ya! Sure.....
ReplyDeleteWrite something about a best friend at school...
ReplyDeleteAlso post an image that reflects your imagination of a true friendly relationship..
thanks for giving me better ideas. and really i will follow it.
ReplyDeleteprasee you should improve.but it is really good and interesting.I like it and keep going
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